Talk:Huon League/@comment-3998736-20130223075235

Inconsistancy Here:

"The earliest record of the Huon League dates back to approximately 1200 years pre-founding (otherwise known as 0 S.C, or 0 So'raan Current)"

Within this sentance, you might want to say, "The earliest written records in the So'raan language" or "of the Huon/So'raan people". Since obviously, records of the league can't predate the league by a thousand years.

Much more critically however, you date things in history treating the earliest records as the start point for the calender. "420 SC" for example, should probably be "780 BSC" or whatever variant you would recommend.

Also, keep in mind that I've included So'raan speakers to the south of the League. They're politically independant but if they haven't already been considered, it might be worth considering why they wouldn't join the league. A heretical Dualistic religion [ressembling the Toryl further] would be a good cause in my book and worth a least a footnote.